Wish to write gross sales emails like a professional?
Kristina and Will have a look at widespread e mail errors (utilizing actual examples) and rewrite them so as to be taught what to do in another way.
Be part of Kristina Finseth (Sr. Supervisor, Outbound Progress Advertising at Greenhouse) and Will Allred (Co-Founder & COO at Lavender) to get TWO views and TWO approaches on actual gross sales emails, each week on Gross sales Hacker.
Watch the re-write, and take a look at the earlier than and after emails beneath! 👇
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Will,
I wished to observe up on my final e mail.
Our retention charge working with firms like yours is 87% after 2 months as a result of we hold bringing them new prospects.
Our e mail tech + your killer supply, despatched 100s of occasions a day to focused lead lists – you’ll persistently generate leads.
Merely put – what we do, works.
As a result of we’re particularly in search of knowledge, analytics and software program firms just like you, we solely have 5 spots out there in your trade.
Would you be open to debate the above over a fast 15-minute name?
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Comply with Up 1: BAR Your Case Examine
Will, are you accustomed to _____?
After we met them, they appeared to be at an analogous stage. Most leads got here via their PLG movement.
We bolted onto their outbound crew. Particularly, we centered on serving to scale up their particular person person base.
Consequently, their crew needed to 2x to handle the certified inbound. Month-to-month MRR development has 2x’d.
Has your crew carried out any outbound for this but?
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Comply with Up 2: Considerate Bump
Hey Will, did you catch my be aware?
I reached out as a result of we’ve been having a whole lot of success working with PLG pushed firms.
If outsourcing a few of your outbound isn’t a precedence, simply let me know. Completely satisfied to share a few of what we’ve seen working.
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