Breaking Up the Proper Method

Wish to write gross sales emails like a professional?

Kristina and Will have a look at frequent e-mail errors (utilizing actual examples) and rewrite them to be able to study what to do in another way.

Be part of Kristina Finseth (Sr. Supervisor, Outbound Progress Advertising at Greenhouse) and Will Allred (Co-Founder & COO at Lavender) to get TWO views and TWO approaches on actual gross sales emails, each week on Gross sales Hacker.

Watch the re-write, and take a look at the earlier than and after emails beneath! 👇

Breaking Up the Proper Method

Break Up 1: Bye For Now

Hey Will,

I reached out a number of instances. I’m going to chalk it as much as my timing being off.

Given the current hype round GPT – I wished to spotlight your voice on the subject. Our viewers is about 10k and rising.

Be happy to right me, if I’ve received it unsuitable. I’ll cease my outreach for now.

Break Up 2: The Referral

Hey Will,

Would your co-founder, William, be a greater particular person to speak to about this?

I see your identify on LinkedIn a bunch, however I additionally understand William may need to be lead voice on this subject as CEO.

Excited to spotlight your staff, and the hype constructing on this area.

Bonus Play

Hey William,

Did Will ahead you my be aware? I’m writing a bit on the hype associated to GPT.

I believed your staff’s voice could be vital to spotlight.

Is that this extra a factor for him otherwise you?

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